Post by nijil-xnv on Apr 1, 2012 23:34:13 GMT -6
So as you guys know, I'm working on a comic that I've started posting up. Like I mentioned before all of it is old pages up until the 3rd chapter (and I've just started posting the 1st chapter) but I was wondering if you'd be willing to read it and offer some critques and such even though they're old pages so I can continue to make the new pages even better. Or, if you like the story and just feel like talking about it somewhere, you can do that here as well.
Basically, this is, Nijil needs feedback for motivation at the moment, haha, so if you feel like it, please offer it here!
Things I'm looking for mostly are: does it flow well, does it make sense, can you follow the story without having to ask too many questions?
Obviously, it's only 13 pages in right now, so not all of the questions can be answered but you know how it goes.
The comic updates on Mondays and sometimes on Friday. I'm still figuring out ComicPress so the web page is slightly under construction, hope it's easy to navigate.
projectlocket.interruptedreality.com/
Thank you for any input!
Basically, this is, Nijil needs feedback for motivation at the moment, haha, so if you feel like it, please offer it here!
Things I'm looking for mostly are: does it flow well, does it make sense, can you follow the story without having to ask too many questions?
Obviously, it's only 13 pages in right now, so not all of the questions can be answered but you know how it goes.
The comic updates on Mondays and sometimes on Friday. I'm still figuring out ComicPress so the web page is slightly under construction, hope it's easy to navigate.
projectlocket.interruptedreality.com/
Thank you for any input!